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April 18th, 2001, 04:05 AM
#1
Inactive Member
Before there was you
I had nobody
I was alone
Days were weak
Nights were dark
Both filled with fear
Walking with beauty at my side
Was a dream day and night
Not knowing it was staring back at me
Before there was you
I had no passion to give
No love to share
I could not care before
I blocked it all away
I was blocked away
That was before
Now i have you
I am with you
I have so much passion to give
So much love to share
All my trust is compiled into you
I am here with you
I have much more life now
Much more brightness
You have opened my eyes
You have shown me the path
You have done something to me
I dont know what it is, but i like it
I need you
I need you to stay with me
To say you will never be gone
To say you will never say goodbye
To say you will always be here
I never thought i could be this happy
Without you i am in pain
Before you I was in pain
You are my world
The world that i revolve around
Watching everything I do
I think I am in love
There is just something about you
That I cant explain
I dont know
I can't explain it
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April 18th, 2001, 01:15 PM
#2
Inactive Member
simply affectionate...got some true feeling behind your hand movement that made this one...what inspired this? any individual? do tell!
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April 18th, 2001, 02:43 PM
#3
HB Forum Owner
do tell...tell tell...
meow...
me wants to know!
anyway..
yeah - as machine face said, true affection, and it seems very sincere... a slow description and it seems to have some progression in feeling which is good, because movement and carrying the reader helps to get through the poem...and to understand it..
yeah---anyway...
tell.
___---parch
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April 18th, 2001, 07:54 PM
#4
Inactive Member
hahhaha, Sorry Guys, there was no female behind it, i wish there was, i was just sitting down and just thinking about what i didn't have i guess, thats all. If there was, you guys would be the first to know. -Zeik
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